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Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Blog Reflection

Throughout this trimester I have learned and evolved as a writer. The blog posts and the ongoing reading at home have brought me to see the creativity in writing as well as the form and structure. Although I am still not the best writer, through more experiences like this blog, I will learn more. Starting off this year was a little bit difficult. Reading is a big weakness of mine. I am a very slow reader but I have noticed an improvement within this year. One struggle I had through this experience was that it was hard for me to just sit down and start reading. I worked past this by making myself every night read a certain amount of pages. Also another struggle was thinking of a good blog to write about. I worked past this by thinking about the characters in the story, and how they affect the theme and the plot. Through some thought and certain processes I was able to write a good blog using textual evidence and creative thinking. Also, a strength I had in writing blogs was picking out the main ideas of the text as well as writing good questions at the end to bring literary thought to the view’s mind. Although I did not read many books this year, I found an interest in writing and reading.
                  Over this year, I have become a better writer. But also, I have grown to understand the main ideas of character and theme. The ideas of character and theme were a bit complex for me in the beginning. I knew what characters did and looked but I did not understand the reasons and thematic concepts within each character. For example, in my 2nd blog post of this trimester, I explain a little about the main character. “In this book, the main character, Robert Langdon, is a symbolist who knows lots about the history of ancient cultures” (Sones, 2). Before, I would not go in depth on characters. All I knew was the outer shell of a character, not the mindset, feelings, and contributions to the story. I did not know the ideas of dynamic and flat characters as well as complex and static features of each person in the story. Along with my misunderstanding of complex characters, I did not state anything about theme in my blog; this brought an uncreative and boring aspect to the blog. My lack of creative thinking was clearly shown through many of the passages in my 2nd blog post. “I predict that while investigating this terrible crime, Robert will get himself into lots of trouble like in the last book, The Da Vinci Code” (Sones, 2). Before, I did not go in-depth about theme. I simply wrote down what I thought was going to happen in the plot with no intelligent information, when I could have talked about a prediction of what the theme will be.
                  Fortunately, over the trimester, my writing severely changed for the better. As we talked in class and I wrote/read more, I grew to understand the concepts of theme and character. In time, I added more detail about the complex characters and how they bring messages, convey theme, and pull the plot forward. Also, I brought more thematic ideas to the table. In my 7th blog post, you can see the changes I made to improve my critical thinking and conceptual ideas. “Olivetti is a Swiss Guard leader that is very strict and strong. Olivetti is very aggressive and can disagree a lot. He pulls the plot by being weary about the Illuminati attack. As the book moves on, Olivetti helps bring the Illuminati to justice. One symbol that would describe him would be a teacher's apple. This describes Olivetti because Olivetti is very strict but is giving and caring like a teacher” (Sones, 7). I grew as a writer over the trimester because instead of putting plain and simple observations, I went to extremes and described how they affect the plot as well as describe them as people. I described each main character with a symbol to show the metaphorical aspects of each person. I now can describe character’s roles in a story as well as how they act, feel, and their characteristics. With my advance in critical thinking on characters, I also became better suited for describing the thematic statements. In my 4th blog post, you can see the development of my writing. “The author Dan Brown shows the ideas of good and evil in the book…The good and evil in Angels and Demons is depicted in the way the characters act and do in the book. The nature of good and evil can reside in all people; it just depends on how they use their minds. The book also describes how evil should always be stopped and good should always be within society” (Sones, 4). At the beginning of the year, I just wrote simple ideas on plot. I never was able to talk about the concepts and ideas in each character and book. After more reading and writing, I was able to form theme ideas within texts and post them on my blog. I was able to talk about the ideas the book referred to, like good and bad.
                  In all, I grew as a writer over this trimester. I started off writing simple observations with no critical thinking. Eventually, I learned the ideas of character as well as the concepts of theme and thematic ideas.




Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Setting Up for Conflict

In Angels & Demons, Robert Langdon and Vittoria are in the Vatican City during Conclave. The setting affects the plot because there is a giant bomb in the city that could destroy the whole area and kill everyone and destroy everything inside. If they were to be located in some desert with no people around, the only plot would be to run away from the bomb. Since the setting is the Vatican, there are thoussands of people that could die including the most infuencial religious figures in the world, the cardinals. Not only would lives be lost, but all the sacred documents and historical sites would be demolished. This impact brings suspense and tension to the book because it is a stressful situation knowing that everyone in Rome could die.
"Even from up here he could hear the rumble of activity in the Sistine Chapel below-the uneasy chatter of 165 cardinals. One hundrued sixty-one cardinals, he corrected. For an instant the camerlengo was falling, plummeting toward hell, people screaming, flames engulfing him, stones and blood raining from the sky. And then silence," (Brown)
This quote dementrates the stress and horror the main characters are taking in during this event. The time and place of this conflict makes the book a suspensful and crazy story.

When you are stressed, does the time and place of the conflict affect the play out of the story?

Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Symbolizing Characters

In the my book, Angels & Demons by Dan Brown, each character is unique in their own way. Ranging from strict and stern, to adventurous and trust worthy. With each new chapter, more is revealed about the characters and the plot in the story.
The main characters are Robert, Vittoria,  and Olivetti. Each have different roles and pull the plot forward.

Olivetti is a Swiss Guard leader that is very strict and strong. Olivetti is very aggressive and can disagree a lot. He pulls the plot by being weary about the Illuminati attack. As the book moves on, Olivetti helps bring the Illunminati to justice. One symbol that would describe him would be a teacher's apple. This describes Olivetti because Olivetti is very strict but is giving and caring like a teacher. He is giving because he helps Robert and Vittoria find the killer. According to the text, " 'Until these numbers count down? Until Vatican City disappears? Believe me, I do not take kindly to people tampering with me security system...I am concerned. It is my job to be concerned. But what you have told me here is unacceptable'" (Brown, 112). This quote shows his aggressive manners and strict rules but also shows how he is caring and giving because he does want everyone's safety.

Vittoria is a strong and fearless girl woman. Vittoria is also a scientist so she is very smart with great ideas. She moves the plot along because she was the one that created the epic bomb that could destroy the Vatican. She also tries to stop the problem by helping the police find the Illuminati member. Vittoria can be symbolized as a wolf because of her strong abilities, fearless mind, and smart ideas. In the text, "'Someone needs to make sure the inside is clean...I meant me'" (Brown, 196). This quote shows her strength and fearlessness in action.

Robert is a history professor that brings lots of twists to the story. He pulls the plot as a protagonist that tries to stop the antagonist from killing thousands of people. Robert is a very smart and strong man. He can be symbolized with an old book. This is because he is a very intellectual person with great qualities. Also, like how an old book is strong because it has lasted for hundreds of years, Robert is also strong. According to the text, "Langdon chuckled to himself. He was amazed how few people knew Santi, the last name of one of the most famous Renaissance artists ever to live." This quote shows Landon's great knowledge and ability to figure things out and help stop the Illuminati.

Based upon the descriptions, what other symbols do you think describe the people's characteristics?